I like this shot last shot but I had an idea. You most likly dont have time to be changing things around but heres my thought. I thought what if the camera stayed behind him and he fell to his knees and over his shoulder you could see what it said on the head stone.. Maybe he blocks the view of whats shocking him them when he falls the headstone becomes visible. You dont have to listen to me though. I like what you have.
With the photo book dropping. maybe a slight antisipation with it. (if that makes sense, I dont know the lingo) But have the phone book reach the end of the table and balance a little before it suddenly falls. Just my 2cents.
I like this shot last shot but I had an idea. You most likly dont have time to be changing things around but heres my thought.
ReplyDeleteI thought what if the camera stayed behind him and he fell to his knees and over his shoulder you could see what it said on the head stone.. Maybe he blocks the view of whats shocking him them when he falls the headstone becomes visible. You dont have to listen to me though. I like what you have.
With the photo book dropping. maybe a slight antisipation with it. (if that makes sense, I dont know the lingo) But have the phone book reach the end of the table and balance a little before it suddenly falls. Just my 2cents.